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Thinking, Thinking, Thinking
The first step in preparing your application essay is to brainstorm on what matters most – yourself! You need to give yourself sufficient time to develop your thoughts. Consider the list of subjects and questions to ask yourself to get you started. This list is provided through QuintCareers.com and EssayEdge.

The most important part of your essay is the subject matter. You should
expect to devote about 1-2 weeks simply to brainstorming ideas. To begin
brainstorming a subject idea, consider the following points. From
brainstorming, you may find a subject you had not considered at first.
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What are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider them
accomplishments? Do not limit yourself to accomplishments you have been
formally recognized for since the most interesting essays often are based on
accomplishments that may have been trite at the time but become crucial when
placed in the context of your life.
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Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you from everyone
else? How did you develop this attribute?
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Consider your favourite books, movies, works of art, etc. Have these
influenced your life in a meaningful way? Why are they your favourites?
·
What was the most difficult time in your life, and why? How did your
perspective on life change as a result of the difficulty?
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Have you ever struggled mightily for something and succeeded? What made
you successful?
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Have you ever struggled mightily for something and failed? How did you
respond?
·
Of everything in the world, what would you most like to be doing right
now? Where would you most like to be? Who, of everyone living and dead, would
you most like to be with? These questions should help you realize what you love
most.
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Have you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if your eyes were opened
to something you were previously blind to?
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What is your strongest, most unwavering personality trait? Do you
maintain strong beliefs or adhere to a philosophy? How would your friends
characterize you? What would they write about if they were writing your
admissions essay for you?
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What have you done outside of the classroom that demonstrates qualities
sought after by universities? Of these, which means the most to you?
·
What are your most important extracurricular or community activities?
What made you join these activities? What made you continue to contribute to them?
·
What are your dreams of the future? When you look back on your life in
thirty years, what would it take for you to consider your life successful? What
people, things, and accomplishments do you need? How does this particular
university fit into your plans for the future?
It is best to read through the previous questions and just let the
answers linger in your mind. Writing a college admission essay is not one where
books are what matters. What matters is your ability to articulate and show and
engage the reader into understanding who you are and what you are about.

It may seem silly to have to think about yourself and try to describe
yourself to others. In this case, you might want to resort to asking your
family and friends what they think your biggest accomplishments have been. What
is it about you that distinguishes you from others they might know? It might be
something as simple as getting them to write a short list of traits they see in
you that are positive traits that spark as subject of thought you can then
write on. What life experiences have they seen you thrive through? What are key
moments that they have been a part of while you experienced them?
Your childhood for the most part probably played a role in who you are
today. Maybe you always knew that you wanted to grow up to be a doctor. Or
maybe you had something completely different in mind and that something was
sparked early in life. Markers want to know about who you presently are, but it
might be an interesting twist to be able to put some of your childhood memories
into your essay to give it some genuine character.
Who do you look up to? Who in your life has pushed you harder, seen you
through the rough times, or inspired you to do more? These people are role
models that you can learn from. You could talk about them and how their personality
traits are things that you aspire to and try to develop.

Still stuck in a writer’s block? Try reading some sample admission
essays. This is not to base your essay off of those already done; it is more to
see how you can write it differently to show your true self to the reader.
Think of the future. What do you plan on doing after university or
college. What will your admission into __________ college actually do for you?
Why not look into the future and tell them what this admission will mean to you
and what will result from them accepting you. If you show your determination
for your goals now, you can show them how you can fulfill them as part of their
institution.
And remember, this process is not supposed to kill you, or be harder
than studying. You’re writing about you so make sure when you find it, you’re
passionate about it and you WANT to write it. This way you won’t sound bored through
your style of writing. You should be excited, enthusiastic and eloquent in your
application essay writing.

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